After reading the comment all i can is 'dev please get some (mental)help".
I hate l0ser(pushover, submissive, Coward, sissy) MC.
Also hate NTR, sharing, swinging etc.
Hate femdom if with MC but don't mind if other side character do it with each other.
Damn Dev, toxic relationship & bisexual (or lesbian) characters is one thing but to make supposed LI girl kiss another girl who almost killed MC while also he there laying on floor injured is just insanity. If it was revenge plot I would have understand it but to do it in non-revenge + in harem VN is just fked up.
Not sure what everyone is whining about, I understand the scene was removed... Yet, I literally didn't find anything horrible in this VN. Let's say there was "Cheating/NTR/Cucking.", you want to act like you're not doing that in the VN's you play? It's okay when you do it, but not others? That's some major double-standards.
@Gladerine, you make the VN you want. If you want a girl kissing another girl, do that. You can make the lesbian scenes optional, that's the best solution, of course it'll take some more coding, but it'll be easy enough.
Hey there Gladerine, I'd like to talk to you via Discord. But sadly all your links are expired. If there would be a possibility to talk to you pls add me "rudy.de". I'd also advise you to refresh your Discord links so people can join. I wish you a great day, ~Crown
While I can see how some people might not like how Aria treats MC, its kind of a common trope so I don't view it as harshly. I should also say it's honestly really impressive that you responded to the criticisms so quickly and openly; good on you.
Keep up the good work, dev. I'm looking forward to seeing how far you go!
Sorry, but I don’t have a macOS device, so I can’t run tests to make sure everything works properly. I already have enough on my plate without releasing something with bugs. I’ll try to solve this issue as soon as possible, and if I find a solution before releasing version 0.1.3, I’ll upload it.
I honestly think it's unfair that you can close Raven's path for just one comment, even if the most unfair thing is that you can't close Aria's path, I was hoping there would be the option, Whether he confesses to her in the bedroom or in the changing room, even though he has a weakness for redheads, Aria makes him reconsider, her personality is horrible.
The MC is supposed to be the one who is going to save the world and all that, so he should first grow a backbone and put an end to Aria's spoiling and not let himself be trampled by her (or Well, for those who like it, there should be 2 routes, one where they let themselves be trampled and the other where they submit)
The game has potential, but the inevitable things and the lack of character of the MC take away a lot of points.
The option to end Raven’s route was only added as a joke. You can either play along or ignore her without it affecting her route.
As for Aria, I’m already working on it. I’m also taking this time to review the story and add more choices where possible to keep everything fitting within the story. I hope to finish within a week or two.
I share updates like this on my Patreon (you can follow for free; I try to make important messages public) and also on Discord.
Duly noted, I honestly don't care about Raven and Aria much less, but if she can be avoided, it would be a 11/10 or change her personality, as I mentioned before, from there I am focused on seeing the other girls, I hope that this Bella is not insufferable like Aria, I honestly closed and uninstalled the game after Aria's forced scene, now, I will wait for the next update and see if there is any improvement and see how it continues and mainly see if the MC grew a pair (balls) that he really needs.
I downloaded the game three days ago but haven't played it yet. The discordant link in the game has expired, and so has it here. So could you send a new link
i replayed the 1.2 version and Aria is still a disgusting person, her relationship with the MC is super uber toxic, she beats him, uses magic against him, denigrates him in casual conversations in front of others, exploits him emotional and financial, isolates him from other friends, and the worst of all MC is acting like a love sick puppy that still limps back to their owner after the owner kicked the shit out of it.
Bella gets somewhat redeemed without the cut scene.
But Aria is still trash if i had a friend like the MC i would force him to exit this relationship because to be honest it's just abuse against him. her sex scene is forced femdom bullshit and she does it purely as a power play, and MC says he would be fine with being her toy WTF boy grow a fucking pair and kick her out of your life you pathetic sack.
If a man would act (like Aria) that towards a women, he would sit behind bars if her family or bystander didn't get him first.
Damn man. I was about to download but after reading your comment i changed my mind. Also if author don't do anything about this issue, many fans/players who are not into fendom & toxic Relationship will leave.
101 how to kill harem game on arrival lmao, No sane true harem dev would of even considered that scene at all in the entire game, but you put it in its first release, lesbian ntr is still ntr, also sounds like you are adding more later? lmao
Bella And Aria are absolut scum and the MC is an god tier retard, should have let them die after the display they pulled off. Seriously fuck them. It's a shitty start if you want the main cast to become and or stay dead.
Ok but will the actual Lesbian content still be unavoidable? I don't really like the fact of bisexual girls in a harem but if I can at least avoid them actually doing anything together then I can deal with it. Like in Stormside for example you can have a character be bisexual but still avoid Lesbian content
I am generally ok with relationships between girls inside the harem, but that kissing scene was bad (too soon and seems that Aria loves MC less than she loves Bella). Especially after the jealousy displays by Aria, is hypocrisy!
Sigh, looked good till I read about the forced lesbian/gay NTR content. Pass.....Even if you say it's "Bi" it is still gay/lesbian content. Same as 2 guys sexually interacting, gay. And forced lesbian content also counts as NTR. Just because it's a woman, it still counts the same as another man that isn't wanted . And......girls don't need to be gay to have a threesome. They can share the same dick without being gay. I don't know why some people think they need to be gay to be in a threesome. We really need some new devs that know what an actual harem is :( But anyway....good luck
I'll try to strike the right balance between sex scenes and the development of the story and all the characters in each update, so that no important details are overlooked
But unfortunately, I can't just 'un-bisexual' them. In fact, a pretty major event will happen simply because of that orientation in one of the characters.
If you want to avoid lesbianism better avoid the game, a character Aria is forced throughout the game in the Mc and there is no way to avoid her plus she is a bitch who is quite annoying, said character says she loves the Mc (you could almost say they are in a relationship), then a friend of theirs appears who almost kills (or kills) the Mc, the Mc's supposed girlfriend fights with her but it turns out they were girlfriends before and while the Mc is dying they start kissing and saying they love each other (lmao).
Practically everything is forced and the Mc is a loser, the supposed LI who says she loves the Mc doesn't pay attention to him while he is lying half dead and starts kissing the ex lol
this lesbian garbage being forced into harem games is getting old real fast. A woman counts as NTR just as a man does. And it's not even a Harem, it is a poly relationship. A harem, the love interests are for the MC. If I wanted to see lesbian garbage in a harem I'd play a female protag VN
I'm honestly a bit confused by your comment about ntr and cheating. The whole situation between Bella an Aria simply screams ntr/cheating especially since Aria even made a comment about another girl too. Okay.. You may have removed the kiss but the tension between them surely hasn't changed i assume? Not to mention Arias femdom side and her forceful, toxic and abusive behaviour towards the mc. I can't imagine that the Bella scene was the only planed one where Aria kisses another girl (or more) without mc's knowledge
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After reading the comment all i can is 'dev please get some (mental)help".
I hate l0ser(pushover, submissive, Coward, sissy) MC.
Also hate NTR, sharing, swinging etc.
Hate femdom if with MC but don't mind if other side character do it with each other.
Damn Dev, toxic relationship & bisexual (or lesbian) characters is one thing but to make supposed LI girl kiss another girl who almost killed MC while also he there laying on floor injured is just insanity. If it was revenge plot I would have understand it but to do it in non-revenge + in harem VN is just fked up.
You're playing a Harem VN, yet you hate sharing... HAHAHAHA! You're the one who is toxic.
Tnks, I will
Have a nice day!
Not sure what everyone is whining about, I understand the scene was removed... Yet, I literally didn't find anything horrible in this VN. Let's say there was "Cheating/NTR/Cucking.", you want to act like you're not doing that in the VN's you play? It's okay when you do it, but not others? That's some major double-standards.
@Gladerine, you make the VN you want. If you want a girl kissing another girl, do that. You can make the lesbian scenes optional, that's the best solution, of course it'll take some more coding, but it'll be easy enough.
Hey there Gladerine,
I'd like to talk to you via Discord. But sadly all your links are expired.
If there would be a possibility to talk to you pls add me "rudy.de".
I'd also advise you to refresh your Discord links so people can join.
I wish you a great day,
~Crown
Definitely enjoyed it so far!
While I can see how some people might not like how Aria treats MC, its kind of a common trope so I don't view it as harshly. I should also say it's honestly really impressive that you responded to the criticisms so quickly and openly; good on you.
Keep up the good work, dev. I'm looking forward to seeing how far you go!
Loser
You okay little bud?
Hey, no mac version? :'(
Hi
Sorry, but I don’t have a macOS device, so I can’t run tests to make sure everything works properly. I already have enough on my plate without releasing something with bugs. I’ll try to solve this issue as soon as possible, and if I find a solution before releasing version 0.1.3, I’ll upload it.
Have a great day.
I honestly think it's unfair that you can close Raven's path for just one comment, even if the most unfair thing is that you can't close Aria's path, I was hoping there would be the option, Whether he confesses to her in the bedroom or in the changing room, even though he has a weakness for redheads, Aria makes him reconsider, her personality is horrible.
The MC is supposed to be the one who is going to save the world and all that, so he should first grow a backbone and put an end to Aria's spoiling and not let himself be trampled by her (or Well, for those who like it, there should be 2 routes, one where they let themselves be trampled and the other where they submit)
The game has potential, but the inevitable things and the lack of character of the MC take away a lot of points.
The option to end Raven’s route was only added as a joke. You can either play along or ignore her without it affecting her route.
As for Aria, I’m already working on it. I’m also taking this time to review the story and add more choices where possible to keep everything fitting within the story. I hope to finish within a week or two.
I share updates like this on my Patreon (you can follow for free; I try to make important messages public) and also on Discord.
Duly noted, I honestly don't care about Raven and Aria much less, but if she can be avoided, it would be a 11/10 or change her personality, as I mentioned before, from there I am focused on seeing the other girls, I hope that this Bella is not insufferable like Aria, I honestly closed and uninstalled the game after Aria's forced scene, now, I will wait for the next update and see if there is any improvement and see how it continues and mainly see if the MC grew a pair (balls) that he really needs.
I downloaded the game three days ago but haven't played it yet. The discordant link in the game has expired, and so has it here. So could you send a new link
Apologies, but I’ll update the links once the new version is done.
Hey dev Do you have more plans for lesbian cuckoldry? I have an idea for the next scene. Girls tied him to the chair and force him to watch.
Aria is already dominant, so it's suit perfectly her character
What do you think?
i replayed the 1.2 version and Aria is still a disgusting person, her relationship with the MC is super uber toxic, she beats him, uses magic against him, denigrates him in casual conversations in front of others, exploits him emotional and financial, isolates him from other friends, and the worst of all MC is acting like a love sick puppy that still limps back to their owner after the owner kicked the shit out of it.
Bella gets somewhat redeemed without the cut scene.
But Aria is still trash if i had a friend like the MC i would force him to exit this relationship because to be honest it's just abuse against him.
her sex scene is forced femdom bullshit and she does it purely as a power play, and MC says he would be fine with being her toy WTF boy grow a fucking pair and kick her out of your life you pathetic sack.
If a man would act (like Aria) that towards a women, he would sit behind bars if her family or bystander didn't get him first.
Damn man. I was about to download but after reading your comment i changed my mind. Also if author don't do anything about this issue, many fans/players who are not into fendom & toxic Relationship will leave.
the dev is in the process of reworking the start, both MC and Aria will change so if you are interested wait for the next update and give it a try
101 how to kill harem game on arrival lmao, No sane true harem dev would of even considered that scene at all in the entire game, but you put it in its first release, lesbian ntr is still ntr, also sounds like you are adding more later? lmao
Bella And Aria are absolut scum and the MC is an god tier retard, should have let them die after the display they pulled off. Seriously fuck them. It's a shitty start if you want the main cast to become and or stay dead.
Bella and Aria kissing while the MC is dying, seriously? . The story is cuck god level WTF!
I was incoherent and inconsistent.
I expected mistakes like these; it’s my first game, the first version, and I didn't make a lot of adjustments.
I’ve removed the scene and changed that content. But just a little.
They're still exes, they're still bisexual, But the kiss thing was too much
Thank you for your feedback
Ok but will the actual Lesbian content still be unavoidable? I don't really like the fact of bisexual girls in a harem but if I can at least avoid them actually doing anything together then I can deal with it. Like in Stormside for example you can have a character be bisexual but still avoid Lesbian content
I am generally ok with relationships between girls inside the harem, but that kissing scene was bad (too soon and seems that Aria loves MC less than she loves Bella). Especially after the jealousy displays by Aria, is hypocrisy!
Sigh, looked good till I read about the forced lesbian/gay NTR content. Pass.....Even if you say it's "Bi" it is still gay/lesbian content. Same as 2 guys sexually interacting, gay. And forced lesbian content also counts as NTR. Just because it's a woman, it still counts the same as another man that isn't wanted . And......girls don't need to be gay to have a threesome. They can share the same dick without being gay. I don't know why some people think they need to be gay to be in a threesome. We really need some new devs that know what an actual harem is :( But anyway....good luck
nice.
Thank you!
I hope you enjoyed it
Future tags?
If You mean things like
BDSM, Harem, exhibitionism, Creampie, Vaginal, Oral, Anal, Lesbian, Threesome, Foursome, Stripping, Teasing,
Well... Those for now
And likely more as time goes on
Definitely no NTR or cheating
I'll try to strike the right balance between sex scenes and the development of the story and all the characters in each update, so that no important details are overlooked
About lesbian....will it be avoidable or not? Thanks for the reply
It’s not exactly lesbianism
it's really bisexuality
But unfortunately, I can't just 'un-bisexual' them. In fact, a pretty major event will happen simply because of that orientation in one of the characters.
But the scenes won’t really focus on it
Unless, of course, a threesome calls for it
So every girl is bisexual in this then not just the two we know of right now? Also that Bella introduction was awful by the way
Just the two you now
So you can't "un-bisexual" them as you said and make Lesbian content avoidable because you decided to make it a major plot point later? Seriously?
If you want to avoid lesbianism better avoid the game, a character Aria is forced throughout the game in the Mc and there is no way to avoid her plus she is a bitch who is quite annoying, said character says she loves the Mc (you could almost say they are in a relationship), then a friend of theirs appears who almost kills (or kills) the Mc, the Mc's supposed girlfriend fights with her but it turns out they were girlfriends before and while the Mc is dying they start kissing and saying they love each other (lmao).
Practically everything is forced and the Mc is a loser, the supposed LI who says she loves the Mc doesn't pay attention to him while he is lying half dead and starts kissing the ex lol
Oh shit really? On second maybe i should wait for more updates before trying this one out, not a fan of loser MCs, thanks for the save dude.
this lesbian garbage being forced into harem games is getting old real fast. A woman counts as NTR just as a man does. And it's not even a Harem, it is a poly relationship. A harem, the love interests are for the MC. If I wanted to see lesbian garbage in a harem I'd play a female protag VN
I'm honestly a bit confused by your comment about ntr and cheating. The whole situation between Bella an Aria simply screams ntr/cheating especially since Aria even made a comment about another girl too. Okay.. You may have removed the kiss but the tension between them surely hasn't changed i assume? Not to mention Arias femdom side and her forceful, toxic and abusive behaviour towards the mc. I can't imagine that the Bella scene was the only planed one where Aria kisses another girl (or more) without mc's knowledge